进入听译环节,9位选手都是杀红了眼。评审团一面审核大家的听译作品,一面在暗自流泪——高质量的听译作品太多,实在是太难选了。无奈之下,我们再次使出阴险狡诈baby无齿的招术——抠!
这次的判分标准是这样的:
英语听错的话算1分,然后中文不重复扣 中文翻错的也扣一分 不影响语义的听写错误和中文错别字都是0.5 过分的大小写错误也会酌情扣0.5 ……
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废话少说,先公布最终的四强名单(真的是抠出来的分数啊)
[听译过关晋级——hoopCHINA第三届翻译大赛4强名单]
神投 frostoo soap wooa
无奈的是,实力非常强大的5位选手这轮之后不得不出局了,在此深深感谢他们!你们都是我的偶像!
下面就是我的偶像列表—— 本届翻译大赛最强的9位译者中的5位: emma_zhu Azzurri wingedroc Derkisw rockky
你们都是好样的,用户组还未到翻译团Jr.的,现在自动提升。另外你们会收到来自mousebaby的2000卡路里奖赏(上帝啊,可怜可怜我吧,没有卡了=,=)
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第一轮试题:http://bbs.hoopchina.com/read.php?fid=39&tid=432941&toread=1
第二轮试题:http://bbs.hoopchina.com/read.php?fid=39&tid=437463&toread=1
第三轮试题:http://bbs.hoopchina.com/read.php?fid=39&tid=441580&toread=1
奖品及活动召集贴:http://bbs.hoopchina.com/read.php?fid=39&tid=429981&toread=1
第四轮比赛4进2,重现第一届翻译大赛时的组队参赛—— 游戏规则很简单,4位四强选手被随机分为了2队
分组形势如下——
A队:神投/frostoo战队 B队:soap/wooa战队
2队选手分别合作,翻译两篇文章(每个战队两篇文章都需要翻译的哟!)——http://bbs.hoopchina.com/445644.html(可下载附件)。 请自由分工,最后综合两篇文章的整体质量,4位评委团将进行细致的打分,并投出4票。如果形成2:2平,将会进行网友投票,决定最终的胜负。
最先获得3票的战队将胜出,然后进行同室操戈争夺最后的冠亚军奖品。
2个决赛机会人人平等,大家都华丽地战吧!
投稿邮箱: 完成稿件后先发送到hoopchinafyt@yahoo.com (使用了新邮箱,别发到前2届那个去啦) 投稿形式: 邮件标题统一使用“翻译大赛4强——论坛ID”,来稿请不要使用附件 投稿截止: 北京时间10月19日晚23点59分 评判标准: 1 - 准确无错 2 - 流畅可读 3 - 欢迎个性与创意,但必须先保证1,2两条
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小说下这次的完成情况,大家的中文版本基本都是没啥错误,所以最关键的反倒成为了英文xxxxx的听译是否精准。这一点上实力无比强大的wingedroc吃了大亏(你出局我很痛心),下面放出评委团改了又改的英文xxxxx版本——
House of the Rising Suns?
Shaquille O'Neal's debut with the Suns, was definitely better than I expected, and that move from the South Beach, was just a shot of adrenaline that the Big has been needed. And the Suns have been encouraged that he actually got stronger as the game were on. And it's not just about his 15 and 9, it's about Amare Stoudamire's 37 and 15. If O'Neal can stay on the floor, Amare is going to kill'em (kill them) from the 4, where he belongs. Now that's the good news. The bad news is, that's pretty much what you're going to get from Shaq. While he might work himself into a better shape, he is NOT going to get any younger over the next couple of months. He played about as hard as he could, but if you're expecting much more than what he showed last night, then you're begging. And even if the Suns do get better, the Lakers obviously will too when Andrew Bynum comes back. Shaq got his against the undersized Pau Gasol; what's going to happen, when he has to deal with Bynum, or Tim Duncan come Playoff time. He'll pick up two quick fouls and spend most of his first half on the bench. And wasn't the Daddy brought in to protect the rim and patrol the paint? The Lakers aren't even at full strength and they still dropped 130 on the Suns last night. So the Suns are definitely different, but whether or not better is debatable, a lot can happen between now and the start of the Playoffs. But I didn't see anything last night to make me feel any differently, the Lakers are the team to beat.
West Side Story
They are the real deal. Other than injury, they have no weakness. You have the Alpha Dog Phenom, the best player in the league in Mamba, and Lamar Odom, who's healthy and in his prime, and Pau Gasol, who's been a freaking revelation. The length of the big 3 is incredible and they play so well together and that's a tribute to Gasol! I don't know that I've seen a better mid-season trade than the one Mitch Kupchak worked for this guy. He looks and plays like he's been with them for five years. There was no learning curve, no adjustment whatsoever. The guy is an artist and is brilliant in the open floor and around the basket. Plus, he is somebody Bryant trusts and better yet respects. And it's not just the big 3, the Lakers' bench is great. Guys like Luke Walton, Ronnie Turiaf, Sasha Vujacic and Jordan Farmar give them tremendous energy and they all know and play their roles. As good as they're right now, they're only gonna get that much better when they get Bynum and Chris Mihm and Travis Ariza back. They've got vet at the point, and Bryant who will not let them lose, a couple of 7 footers, athleticism on the wings, killer at bench and a hall of fame coach with 9 rings. I'm not saying you just skip the Playoffs and give the Lakers the title, but clearly, they are the team to beat.
常见的错误清单(括号中是时间轴)——
0:08-0:10 was just a shot of adrenaline that the Big has been needed. 整篇文章最最常见的错误就是时态,这里最后三个单词,应该是has been needed。不少童子听成has been needing了。
0:12-0:14 that he actually got stronger as the game were on. 这里Jim Rome过度得非常快,让人有些应接不暇。that引导的分区前半段需要仔细听才能区分出he actually got,而最后这个were不少同学作了wore。
0:21-0:22 Amare is going to kill'em from the 4 这个kill'em本身就很快,完整的说法是kill them(你们不会恨我吧……太抠了)
0:56-0:59 And wasn't the Daddy brought in to protect the rim and patrol the paint? Daddy就是Shaq,patrol the paint两个单词仔细听应该不是大问题。
1:01-1:03 The Lakers aren't even at full strength 这个at非常之轻……不过词义上其实蛮好判断的。
1:14-1:16 the Lakers are the team to beat. to beat,最后这个/t/不少同学没有察觉,就跟前面那个paint(pain)一样…… 翻译这句的时候也需要稍微留神(整篇文章几乎不容易翻译错误哟,这个算是稍有难度)——“湖人就是那支实力最强的球队”。
1:22-1:24 the best player in the league in Mamba Mamba就是科比,前面不需要冠词修饰
2:08-2:10 they're only gonna get that much better when they get Bynum and Chris Mihm and Travis Ariza back. gonna这个单词稍有难度,好吧,参赛的似乎没有错的……
2:11-2:13 They've got a vet at the point 这个vet和point不光是听,翻译时也不能栽跟头
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下面是各位评委小心翼翼指出的各位参赛选手错误。
神投
Shaq O'Neil和Paul Gasol(0.5——shaq和pau哭了,名字被改) Amare is going to killer from the 4(0.5) The Lakers are even to full strength(1) 从现在到季后赛开始(常规赛还剩1/3),很多事请都可能发生。但昨晚我看到的一切,并未让我感到有任何不同:想拿总冠军?请首先击败湖人。(这句话的位置放错了,应该是第一段的收尾部分……抠掉你0.5)
总计2.5
评论:第一个交稿的同学,非常好!(看到其他选手大多在最后2小时交稿,评委们哭了……知道我今天凌晨6:40鼻血狂喷么……)神投整篇译文错误极少,各处典故考证得非常到位,实乃是上等佳作。YD中露着纯洁,纯洁中又闪现些YD……嗯,我很喜欢。
亮点
He played about as hard as he could 他已然竭尽全力(参见第三节末段,奥尼尔的虎扑救球) ——查证到这个级别,我也只能服了
He looks and plays like he's been with them for five years. There was no learning curve, no adjustment whatsoever. 他与科比、奥多姆的配合十分默契,就好像已在一起合练过5年。管它什么学习曲线,什么适应期,一概不需要!
They've got vet at the point, and Bryant who will not let them lose, a couple of 7 footers, athleticism on the wings, killer at bench and a hall of fame coach with 9 rings. 他们拥有老兵控位、不许失败先生科比、几个7尺长人、运动型两翼、一群板凳杀手,以及执教生涯获得9枚总冠军戒指的名人堂教练。
frostoo
错误: that the big has been needing. 应为needed 0.5 And the Suns have to be... 应为have been 0.5 got stronger as the game wore on. 应为were on. 0.5 Shaq got his against a undersized Pau Gasol(英语老师说a在这里肯定是错的) 合计 0.5
太阳队买入这个大支佬,不就是为了保护篮筐并控制禁区的马?(错别字扣0.5)
总计2.5
评论: 这么说吧, 经过前两轮大家华丽的肆意挥洒, 此轮的听译应该是——起码在我看来——大鱼大肉之后的爽口蔬菜, 而且对于解说稿来说能快速简洁让听众们理解就好, 舌灿莲花那是黄健翔们几年才爆发一次的事儿, 满场的大词儿只会让我们越听越累, 不是吗? 而frostoo童鞋的翻译稿is just what I want. 简洁明了, 错误极少, 口语化的xxxxx也就按照我们平时的汉语口语翻了过来, 而且他还贴心地把稿件做成易于对比的一段一段的类似字幕的形式, 所有人里应该只有他和derk是这样的吧, 谢谢了nigga^^;; 话说回来, 在这里对所有热爱翻译有志于参加翻译团的童子们提一句, 翻译并不总是越华丽越YD越好的, 这种精妙的再创作, 也要看场合的哟:)
亮点: While he might work himself into better shape,he's not going to get any younger over the next couple of months. 虽然大鲨鱼可以通过健身来让自己的身材变得好看一点,但是他不可能在接下来的几个月里面便返老还童。
And wasn't the Daddy brought in to protect the rim and patrol the paint? 太阳队买入这个大支佬,不就是为了保护篮筐并控制禁区的马?(评委: 错别字扣0.5)
Guys like Luke Walton,Ronny Turiaf,Sasha Vujacic,and Jordan Farmar give them tremendous energy,and they all know and play their roles. 卢克-沃顿,洛尼-图利亚夫,萨沙-武贾西奇,还有乔当-砝码这些球员给了湖人队巨大的能量,而且他们知道自己应该干什么,并各尽其职。
PART 3 FUELING THE FIRE?(imcomplete) (评委: 你的incomplete拼错啦不过不扣你分乐....) 第三部分 火上浇油? The Knicks may have finally hit rock bottom last............. 尼克斯队终于触底......(评委: 连最后一个词儿都不放过...)
Soap
as he's actually getting stronger(0.5) where he belonged(0.5) patrol the pain(1) for Lakers are the team to be(1) in the league--the Mamba(0.5) 届时,他们帐下有经验丰富的老兵(0.5)
总体错误小分:4.0
强大的存在又令评委们颤抖了~~除了a vet at the point的point没有想到是指控位外,中英文双语范本版的标准答案又出现了(mousebaby:我有罪,事后检查了一遍挑了几个英文的骨头)。不仅听得准确译得YD,而且两个小标题“夕阳西升”和“西线战事”更是令人销魂。要说有不足,就是自己往里加的调料略有点嫌多。“治大国若烹小鲜”,这句话送给soap想一下。不过这可不算批评哦,是评委在鸡蛋里挑骨头啦,哈哈。
亮点摘录:
It's not just about his 15 and 9, it's about Amare Stoudamire's 37 and 15. If O'neal can stay on the floor, Amare is going to kill 'em from the four, where he belongs. 列位看官,且不要被他区区15分9板的数据迷惑了呀,37分15板的兽化小斯才是沙克效应之真正杀招:这意味着如果鲨鱼在场,五号位ATM●阿玛尔同学终于能转专业回四号位虐待对手了。
You have the Alpha dog phenom, the best player in the league and the Mamba, and Lamar Odom, who is healthy and in his prime, and Pau Gasol, who has been a freaking revelation. 你看,他们的头狼系联盟首席球员——科●黑曼巴●大婶,加上健康并正值巅峰期的喇嘛●有时放空●奥多姆,以及开启邪恶化学反应的保罗●极品人妻●家嫂。这三头怪的能力值BT得有点假
There was no learning curve, no adjustment, whatsoever. The guy's an artist, and he's brilliant in the open floor and around the basket. 没有磨合期,没有初学者的起伏,即插即用如USB接口。论长相论球技,这家伙都是个搞艺术的:无论外围策应还是篮下强攻,都才华横溢信手拈来。
Wooa
Wasn’t the Daddy brought in to protect the rim and patrol the paint?(1) the best player in the league and the Mamba(0.5) The link of the Big three is incredible(1) they play so well together, and that's a tribute to Gasol(1)
总体错误小分:3.5
和EmmaZhu同样出色但是优势刚好相反。Wooa在听译里面犯了几个小错,但是他的中文翻译可以说是完美出色。YD派能够达到的高境界,“YD不放荡,风流不下流”是这篇译文的诠释,并且还融入了浓浓的Homer之爱。在忠于原文的基础上颇有神来之笔。
And that move from South Beach was just the shot of Adrenaline that the “Big Has Been” needed. 从南海岸[译注:迈阿密海滩的一段]挪挪屁股正是这位“过气大佬”所需要的一针鸡血。
You have the Alpha dog phonem, the best player in the league in the Mamba, and Lamar Odom, who’s healthy and in his prime, and Pau Gasol, who has been a freaking revelation. 他们有总攻·联盟最强者·曼巴,有活蹦乱跳正当盛年的喇嘛·奥多姆,和TMD称得上神迹的炮·加索尔。
He looks and plays like he’s been with them for 5 years. There was no learning curve, no adjustment whatsoever. 他不论是看起来,还是打起来,都好像已经归顺我湖5年了。零学习,零调整,零!
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Rockky
And the Suns actually have been encouraged that they got stronger as the game wore on.(1+0.5) control the paint?(0.5) the best player in the league in the mamba(0.5) He looks in plays like(0.5) The link of the Big three is incredible(1) They've got a vet at the point(1)
比起太阳得到大鲨鱼,湖人抢劫加索尔的交易才是重磅炸弹。(1) 这朵小红花,理应送给加索尔啊!(0.5) 总体错误小分:6.5
错误只比之前两位略多了一点点,不过中文翻译也是强大异常。如果说wooa是YD派的领衔人物,那么Rocky的翻译让我们看到Old School派中华丽翻译风的一支依然独领风骚。Rocky的中文写作功底可以说是参赛者中最强的之一,这篇文章虽然不如新闻播报的口头化,但是读起来流畅美丽一气呵成。
亮点摘录:
the Suns actually have been encouraged that they got stronger as the game wore on. And it's not just about his 15 and 9, it's about Amare Stoudemire's 37 and 15. If O'Neal can stay on the floor, Amare is going to kill it from the four, where he belongs. 比赛逐步深入,运转逐渐流畅,太阳愈加强大。鲨鱼交出的15分、9个篮板的成绩单固然威武,但小斯轰下的37分、15个篮板才是王道!何解?鲨鱼一旦登场,小斯便可重新扛起四号位的大旗,全面解放后的小霸王必将如鱼得水,大杀四方,谁人可挡!
You have the Alpha dog Phenom, the best player in the league in the mamba and Lamar Odom who is healthy and in his prime. And Pau Gasol who has been a freaking revelation. 且看湖人新阵,为首的是统治级别的巨星科比,此君不仅位列联盟最佳,还是最危险的那条黑色曼巴蛇——强壮、疾速、好斗和剧毒;做了多年“二当家”的拉玛尔-奥多姆,身强体壮,状态巅峰;而保罗-加索尔的火线加盟,更是神奇的不可思议,让人尖叫不已!
Bryant who will not let them lose, a couple of 7 footers, athleticism on the wings, a killer bench and a Hall of Fame coach with 9 rings. 痛恨失败的科比将引领球队走向胜利,两个7尺高的大个儿足可撑起内线的天空,运动活力充沛的翼侧球员将会发起强力的冲击,卧虎藏龙的替补阵容绝对饱含杀机,还有戴着九枚总冠军戒指的名人堂教练将继续施展他的三角进攻
Emmazhu
as the game wore on(0.5) work himself in better shape(0.5) who is being a freaking revelation(0.5) he’s somebody Bryant trust(0.5) 随时比赛的进行(0.5) 而这个时候太阳队能在鲨鱼身上受益匪浅(1) 然后接下来第一节的大半时间都去坐板凳了(1) 他们在这个节骨眼上得到了一个老兵(1)
总体错误小分5.5分。
评语:强大的听辨能力,英语听译版可以拿来做标准答案,很多小细节都听得非常出色,像adrenalin,a vet之类。中文翻译能够在英语的基础上加以发挥,而且一些小处体现出了对上下文逻辑关系的理解。可惜的是在英语翻译中文中出现了一些小错。不过无损总体作品的强大。
亮点摘录:
if O’neal can stay on the floor, Amare is going to kill from the 4, where he belongs. 如果鲨鱼能在场上待着,那小斯就会在他雄霸的4号位上肆意厮杀对手。
if you are excepting much more than what he showed last night, then you are begging. 但是如果你想让他做的比昨晚的还要多,嘿。老兄,你还是去做祷告得了!
The guy is an artist and he is brilliant in the open floor and around basket, plus, he’s somebody Bryant trusts and better yet respects, 这家伙就是一个艺术家,在场上得到足够空间的时候,他决策能力出众,传球视野开拓,个人进攻同样犀利,冲击到篮下的时候,更是意识清醒。而且难得的是,他是那个传说中的布莱恩特长久以来最为信任和尊重的人。
Wingedroc
If O'neal can stay on the floor, Amare is going to kill 'em from the four, where he belongs.(0.5) what's going to happen when he has to do with Bynum(0.5) The Lakers aren't even in full strength(0.5) the Lakers are the team to beat.(0.5) the best player in the league and the Mamba(1) The link of the Big three is incredible(1) I've ever seen a better mid-season trade than the one Mitch Kupchak worked for this guy(1) He looks in place like he's been with them for five years(1) no adjustment, whatsoever.(0.5) The guy's an artist(1) They've got a vet at the point(1)
总体错误小分:8.5
非常可惜的一位筒子,因为不知道要附带英语原文,导致最后12小时熬夜辛苦地爬格子。。。因此英语xxxxx错漏较多。不过看得出来是临时赶工的关系,因为很多英语里错掉的到了中文原文翻译又对了,囧。摸摸。
亮点摘录:
And wasn't the Daddy brought in to protect the rim and patrol the paint? 但是,把“老爹”沙克找来不就是为了让他保护好篮框,在油漆区欺男霸女的吗?
You have the Alpha dog phenom, the best player in the league and the Mamba, and Lamar Odom, who is healthy and in his prime, and Pau Gasol, who has been a freaking revelation. 科比,狼群里的头狼,联盟头号抗把子;奥多姆,没伤没病,正值巅峰;还有加索尔,上帝一哆嗦送给湖人的礼物。
Azzurri
was just the shot of adrenaline应为was just a shot of adrenaline 0.5 as the game wore on应为as the game were on 0.5 Amare is going to kill it from the floor应为 Amare is going to kill'em from the four 1 though he might work himself a better shape应为while he might work himself into a better shape 0.5 And even though the Suns do get better应为And even if the Suns do get better 0.5 Shaq got his against undersize Pau Gasol应为Shaq got his against the undersized Pau Gasol 0.5 when you ask to do with Bynum or Tim Duncan应为 when he has to deal with Bynum or Tim Duncan 1 The Lakers aren't even at full strength and they still dropped one thirty on the Suns last night应为The Lakers aren't even in the full strength and they still dropped one thirty(最好是130) on the Suns last night 0.5 So the Suns are definitely different for whether or not they are better is debatable应为 So the Suns are definitely different, but whether or not better is debatable 0.5 The length of the Big 3应为The link of the Big 3 1 that's attributed to Gasol应为 that's a tribute to Gasol 0.5 The guy is an artist and is brilliant in the open of floor应为The guy is an artist and is brilliant in the open floor 0.5 they're only getting get down much better应为they're only gonna get that much better 0.5 They got better the point应为 They've got vet at the point 1 athleticism among the wings, a killer bench应为athleticism on the wings, killer at bench 0.5
他在比赛中已经竭尽全力,但是如果他昨晚的表现要远逊于你所期待的,那你就自祈多福吧 中文翻译得不够清楚0.5分 加上他是布莱恩特所信任,以及更佳,所尊敬的人 中文翻译得不够清楚0.5分
扣分10.5
亮点: 只要奥尼尔能够呆在场上,阿玛雷就能在属于他的地盘上大杀“四”方 (我喜欢这个双关)
Dirkisw
Shaq O'neal's debut with the Suns(1) the shot of adrenalin(1) Amare Stoudamire's 37 and 1(0.5) that's pretty much you were going to get from shaq(0.5) to protect the rim and patrol the paint(1) aren't even in full strength(0.5) whether or not they're better is debatable. (1) the Lakers are the team to beat(0.5) Other than injury(1) who has been a freaking revelation(0.5) that's a tribute to Gasol(0.5) I don't know that I've ever seen a better mid-season trade(1) There was no learning curve(0.5) As good as they are right now(0.5) They've got a vet at the point(1) athleticism on the wings(1) a hall of fame coach(1)
(名字未大写,及一些名字拼写错误较多,如tim duncun,总体扣0.5分,英语拼写错误多处,总体扣0.5分)
总体错误小分14分。要打屁股的同学,德克士我相信这不代表你的真实实力,下次早点开工啊。
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推荐三篇惊为天人的范文——
frostoo版本
PART 1 HOUSE OF THE RISING SUNS? 第一部分 旭日升?
Shaq O'neal's debut with the suns was definitely better than I expected and that move from south beach was just the shot of adrenalin that the big has been needing. 沙克-奥尼尔在太阳队的首演绝对超出了我的预期,而被从南部的海滩交易到这里这件事正好成了他所需的一针兴奋剂。 And the Suns have to be encouraged that he actually got stronger as the game wore on. 随着比赛的进行,沙克也打得越来越好,这应该让太阳队感到十分欣慰。 It's not just about his 15 and 9,it's about Amare Stoudamire's 37 and 15. 沙克的15分和9个篮板并不是唯一的利好,小斯在比赛中得到的37分和15个篮板更是提供了很大的帮助。 If O'neal can stay on the floor,Amare is going to kill 'em from the four,where he belongs. 如果奥尼尔能够呆在场上的话,小斯便能在4号位(大前锋)的位置上暴掉对手,那是本来就是他应打的位置。 And that' s the good news. 以上是好消息。 The bad news is,that's pretty much what you're going to get from Shaq. 坏消息是,太阳能从沙克身上得到的恐怕也只有这么多了。 While he might work himself into better shape,he's not going to get any younger over the next couple of months. 虽然大鲨鱼可以通过健身来让自己的身材变得好看一点,但是他不可能在接下来的几个月里面便返老还童。 He played about as hard as he could BUT if you're expecting much more than what he showed last night,then you're begging. 他在场上已经尽力了,但是如果你指望他带来比昨晚好的多的表现,还不如直接向上帝祈祷更现实点。 And even if the Suns do get better,the lakers obviously will too,when Andrew Bynum comes back. 而且即使太阳队的确变强了,但是当拜纳姆回归的时候,湖人队显然也会的。 Shaq got his against a undersized Pau Gasol,what's going to happen when he has to deal with Bynum,or Tim Duncan come playoff time? 沙克对上比他小一号的保罗-加索尔可以占得先机,但是如果他对上了拜纳姆呢?或者在季后赛中和邓肯对位又会怎么样呢? He'll pick up two quick fouls,and spend most of the first half on the bench. 他会被迅速吹罚两次犯规,然后在板凳上耗掉大半个上半场的时间。 And wasn't the Daddy brought in to protect the rim and patrol the paint? 太阳队买入这个大支佬,不就是为了保护篮筐并控制禁区的马? The Lakers aren't even in full strength and they still drop 130 on the Suns last night. 可即使是阵容不整的湖人,昨晚依然在太阳队身上刷到了130分。 So the Suns are definitely different but whether or not they're better is debatable. 所以太阳队绝对和以前不同了,但是他们是否变得更好这个问题还有待商榷。 A lot can happen between now and the start of the playoffs BUT I didn't see anything last night to make me feel any differently, the Lakers are the team to beat. 现在到季后赛开始之间这段时间内可以发生很多事情,但是我昨晚看到的并不足以让我的看法发生一点点改变,那便是湖人是最强队。 PART 2 WEST SIDE STORY 第二部分 西区故事 They are the real deal. 他们是一支实打实的强队。 Other than injury,they have no weakness. 除了伤病之外,他们没有任何弱点。 You have the Alpha dog phenom,the best player in the league and the Mamba,and Lamar Odom,who is healthy and in his prime, and Pau Gasol,who has been a freaking revelation. 他们拥有一位一等一的,现象级的,联盟中最好的球手“曼巴蛇”(科比),还有拉马尔-奥多姆,一位处于盛年的健康球员,还有保罗-加索尔,一份太牛逼的意外大礼。 The link of the Big three is incredible,and they play so well together,and that's a tribute to Gasol. 三个人之间的默契令人难以置信,他们一起打得如此之好,证明加索尔十分适合这支球队。 I don't know that I've ever seen a better mid-season trade than the one mitch kupchak worked for this guy. 我以前从来没有见过哪一桩季中交易,有库普恰克为得到加索尔而操作的这一桩这么好。 He looks in place like he's been with them for five years. 他看上去与球队如此合拍,好像他们已经一起打了五年球的样子。 There was no learning curve,no adjustment,whatsoever. (加索尔到队上后)没经历什么学习期,没什么调整,即插即用。 The guy's an artist,and he's brilliant in the open floor and around the basket. 这个家伙是个艺术家,他在空间开阔和接近篮筐的时候表现卓越。 Plus,he's somebody Bryant trust and better yet respects. 况且,布赖恩特信任他。更棒的是,科比还尊重他。 And it's Not just the big three, the Lakers bench is great. 而且除了三叉戟之外,湖人的板凳也十分出色。 Guys like Luke Walton,Ronny Turiaf,Sasha Vujacic,and Jordan Farmar give them tremendous energy,and they all know and play their roles. 卢克-沃顿,洛尼-图利亚夫,萨沙-武贾西奇,还有乔当-砝码这些球员给了湖人队巨大的能量,而且他们知道自己应该干什么,并各尽其职。 As good as they are right now,they're only gonna get down much better when they get Bynum, Chris Mihm,and Trevor Ariza back. 他们现在已经很棒了,而且在拜纳姆,米姆,和阿里扎回来之后他们只会比现在还好出一大截。 They've got a vet at the point,Bryant who'll not let them lose,a couple of seven-footers,athleticism on the wings,a killer bench,and a hall of fame coach with nine rings. 他们现在在控卫位置上有老将出马,还拥有不会容许球队失败的布赖恩特,几个7尺长人,充满运动力的两翼(得分后卫和小前锋),一位只有一只手指戴不上上戒指的名人堂教练。 I'm not saying you just skip the playoffs and give the lakers the title,but clearly they are the team to beat. 我不是说你现在就跳过季后赛直接把总冠军颁给湖人队,但是很显然湖人现在是最强的球队。 PART 3 FUELING THE FIRE?(imcomplete) 第三部分 火上浇油? The Knicks may have finally hit rock bottom last............. 尼克斯队终于触底......
soap版本
House of the Rising Suns?
Shaquille O'Neal's debut with the Suns, was definitely better than I expected, and that move from the south beach, was just a shot of adrenaline that the "Big Has Been" (1) needed. And the Suns have been encouraged as he's actually getting stronger as the game were on. And it's not just about his 15 and 9, it's about Amare Stoudamire's 37 and 15. If O'Neal can stay on the floor, Amare is going to kill'em (kill them) from the 4, where he belonged. Now that's the good news. The bad news is, that's pretty much what you're going to get from Shaq. While he might work himself into better shape, he is NOT going to get any younger over the next a couple of months. He played about as hard as he could, but if you're expecting much more than what he showed last night, then you're begging. And even if the Suns do get better, the Lakers obviously will too when Andrew Bynum comes back. Shaq got his against the undersized Pau Gasol; what's going to happen, when he has to deal with Bynum, or Tim Duncan come Playoff time. He'll pick up two quick fouls and spend most of his first half on the bench. And wasn't the Daddy brought in to protect the rim and patrol the pain? The Lakers aren't even in the full strength and they still dropped 130 on the Suns last night. So the Suns are definitely different, but whether or not better is debatable, a lot can happen between now and the start of the Playoffs. But I didn't see anything last night to make me feel any differently, for Lakers are the team to be.
West Side Story
They are the real deal. Other than injury, they have no weakness. You have the Alpha Dog phenom, the best player in the league--the Mamba, and Lamar Odom, who's healthy and in his prime, and Pau Gasol, who's been a freaking revelation. The length of the big 3 is incredible and they play so well together and that's a tribute to Gasol! I don't know that I've seen a better mid-season trade than the one Mitch Kupchak worked for this guy. He looks and plays like he's been with them for five years. There was no learning curve, no adjustment whatsoever. The guy is an artist and is brilliant in the open floor and around the basket. Plus, he is somebody Bryant trusts and better yet respects. And it's not just the big 3, the Lakers' bench is great. Guys like Luke Walton, Ronnie Turiaf, Sasha Vujacic and Jordan Farmar give them tremendous energy and they all know and play their roles. As good as they're right now, they're only gonna get that much better when they get Bynum and Chris Mihm and Travis Ariza back. They've got vet (2) at the point, and Bryant who will not let them lose, a couple of 7 footers, athleticism on the wings, killer at bench and a hall of fame coach with 9 rings. I'm not saying you just skip the Playoffs and give the Lakers the title, but clearly, they are the team to be.
夕阳西升?
沙克在太阳的处男秀,绝对超乎我的期待了。原来,决绝离开慵懒的迈阿密海滩,才是这个昔日大佬急需的速效救心针。让太阳倍感鼓舞的是,随着比赛的深入,他着实奉上了愈发强悍的演出。列位看官,且不要被他区区15分9板的数据迷惑了呀,37分15板的兽化小斯才是沙克效应之真正杀招:这意味着如果鲨鱼在场,五号位ATM●阿玛尔同学终于能转专业回四号位虐待对手了。恩,以上这些是好消息。坏消息则是:你能从老鲨身上榨取的剩余价值大概也就这么多鸟。当然,他也许会乖乖训练减脂恢复黑菲尔普斯体型,但在接下来的几个月内,他怎样也无法让自己更年轻。为了打球他已经豁了老命,如果还想让他拿出比昨晚劲爆几倍的表现,那您可是在"指望兰多夫防守——奢求"了。
而且就算新太阳真的变得更好了,显然,湖人也会随着安猪伤愈而功力大增。在面对小一号的家嫂时,沙克已经够难受了;由此,我们可以依稀瞥见季后赛上他对付拜纳姆或邓槑时的囧相:迅速吃到两犯,然后在板凳上陪饮水机度过大半个上半场。而当初(科尔)引进沙克●我有警察执照●老爹,不就是指望他来保护篮筐、巡查油漆区的么?可是昨晚,血槽尚未加满的湖人仍在太阳身上予取予求斩落130分。所以,太阳变是变了,至于有没有变得更好,筒子们大可辩个天昏地暗;从现在到季后赛的这段日子,是什么都会发生的。但昨晚的比赛丝毫没动摇砖家我的看法:湖人,已经无限接近冠军了。
西线战事
他们才是值得大家下注押卡的真●王者之师。若非伤病困扰,他们了无缺点。你看,他们的头狼系联盟首席球员——科●黑曼巴●大婶,加上健康并正值巅峰期的喇嘛●有时放空●奥多姆,以及开启邪恶化学反应的保罗●极品人妻●家嫂。这三头怪的能力值BT得有点假,而天赐的家嫂又让这个组合愈加行云流水。我不知道我见过的赛季半程交易中,还有哪桩堪比库普切克空手套白狼勾引家嫂:比赛时的他看上去简直就像个和新队友打了五年球的人,没有磨合期,没有初学者的起伏,即插即用如USB接口。论长相论球技,这家伙都是个搞艺术的:无论外围策应还是篮下强攻,都才华横溢信手拈来。而且,他还是大婶可以信任,进而尊敬的人物。当然,三巨头之外,湖人的板凳匪帮那也是相当彪悍:卢克囧顿,舞男屠夫,帅哥萨沙和小农砝码等。这些劲量小子定位明确,各司其职;一声令下,指哪打哪。 别看现在的湖人够可怕了,更过分的是他们还会迎来复出的拜纳姆,米姆和阿里扎。届时,他们帐下[注:全文唯一的错误]有经验丰富的老兵、一个厌恶失败的布莱恩特和若干七尺长人;有侧翼的运动天赋、一群板凳暴徒以及刷出九枚戒指的名人堂主帅。呃,咱当然不是说季后赛甭打了,直接把奥布莱恩杯颁给湖人就成。但很明显了:他们就是要来夺冠的。
学习各位大大写译者注: 1. 原文的"The big has been"在我看来是对鲨鱼的些微嘲讽。大家都知道鲨鱼喜欢给自己起各种带"大"字的绰号,比如大行李,大柴油机,大亚里士多德以及后来的大仙人掌。
2. 吐血听了无数遍决定这里是vet。查了韦氏,可作veterinarian(兽医-___-)或者veteran的简写。姑且认为应该是后者了。想了想,他把湖人板凳都夸了个遍,如果不提资历最老的功勋级老鱼,自然有点说不过去。
3. 用了很多的●,希望不算太过分。。。
rockky版本(他的中文组织很值得大家学习)
鲨鱼助阵,太阳高升? 太阳“新丁”的惊艳首演,比我预计的要出色不少!从南海滩迁至凤凰城,看来新鲜的空气最合这条鲨鱼胃口,让他再度觅得新的动力!昔日篮下巨无霸亲临,太阳全队上下又怎能不备受鼓舞?比赛逐步深入,运转逐渐流畅,太阳愈加强大。鲨鱼交出的15分、9个篮板的成绩单固然威武,但小斯轰下的37分、15个篮板才是王道!何解?鲨鱼一旦登场,小斯便可重新扛起四号位的大旗,全面解放后的小霸王必将如鱼得水,大杀四方,谁人可挡!这等收效固然不错,但话说回来,这几乎就是你能从鲨鱼那里榨得的全部贡献——诚然,胖鲨鱼也许会发狠一番,让自身苗条些许,但之后数月里,他可有妙法返老还童?老迈鲨鱼在首演中便已竭尽所能,使出了十二分力气,秀出了十八般武艺。诸位还在幻想着以后能欣赏到胖鲨鱼的更佳表演么?奉劝您还是早些洗洗睡了罢。况且,即便因为胖子的存在,太阳功力更甚于前,那又如何?待小鲨鱼拜纳姆回归后,湖人不同样会更上层楼?胖子欺负比自己小一号的加索尔尚算得心应手,但日后当他不得不面对拜纳姆之时,形势又将何如?又或者,在季后赛遭遇老对手蒂姆-邓肯?今非昔比的鲨鱼必会迅速而残忍的早早领到两次犯规,于是乎上半场的大部分时间都只能耗在场下温暖板凳了。太阳孱弱的内线需要鲨鱼的“爱护”,管理层引入他的目的不就是祈祷鲨鱼能够成为篮筐的守卫者,内线的保护神么?但事实却是,昨晚那支缺兵少将、阵容不整的湖人依然能够轻轻松松的在他们身上轰下130分......如此看来,太阳已不再是从前那个太阳,但他们是否更为强大了?这点尚有争论的余地,我等只能走着瞧了。从现在开始到季后赛战火燃起,还存在不少变数,但昨晚的比赛并没有改变我的想法:湖人队才是处于上风的那支队伍。 湖人新阵 笑傲联盟 比起太阳得到大鲨鱼,湖人抢劫加索尔的交易才是重磅炸弹。除了伤病,你还能找出他们的弱点来么?且看湖人新阵,为首的是统治级别的巨星科比,此君不仅位列联盟最佳,还是最危险的那条黑色曼巴蛇——强壮、疾速、好斗和剧毒;做了多年“二当家”的拉玛尔-奥多姆,身强体壮,状态巅峰;而保罗-加索尔的火线加盟,更是神奇的不可思议,让人尖叫不已!三巨头的磨合时间短得令人难以置信,但彼此的融合又是如此美妙、浑然天成......这朵小红花,理应送给加索尔啊!我也许不曾见过有比米奇-库普切克得到加索尔更美好的赛季中期交易了。加索尔在比赛中的表现看起来就像是他已经与湖人众将并肩作战5个年头了——无须经历什么阵痛,无须付出什么学费,也不存在着适应过程......加索尔这家伙简直就是篮球场上的艺术家啊!无论在篮下还是在外围,他都显得这般才华横溢!重要的是,他不仅得到了科比的信任,更赢得了科比的尊重。湖人拥有的全部武器还不仅限于三巨头,他们的替补阵容依然华丽!卢克-沃顿,罗尼-图里亚夫,萨沙-武贾西奇和乔丹-法玛尔为球队带来了巨大的活力,并且他们都明白各自的定位,兢兢业业的扮演好龙套的角色。现在的湖人已经足够强大,等到拜纳姆、克里斯-米姆和特雷沃-阿里扎回归之时,他们只会越来越好。满足了以下几点的他们将会变得愈加无敌:痛恨失败的科比将引领球队走向胜利,两个7尺高的大个儿足可撑起内线的天空,运动活力充沛的翼侧球员将会发起强力的冲击,卧虎藏龙的替补阵容绝对饱含杀机,还有戴着九枚总冠军戒指的名人堂教练将继续施展他的三角进攻......当然,湖人虽强,还不至于强到可以略去季后赛,直接颁发总冠军的程度——但毫无疑问,他们现在位列联盟之巅!
引用第46楼 frostoo发表的: 
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